Fix this sentence pleaseeeee?
i’m talking about having killer nerves while climbing the pamper pole…
“My heart continued to race, feverishly pumping blood as if engaged in survival mode.”
the last part of the sentence just seems a little awkard. feel like words need to be rearranged or subsituted with other word. please and thank you!
Always keep it simple.
My heart raced feverishly, pumping blood in a frantic survival mode.
or
My heart pumped blood feverishly, racing to survive.
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